劳动节(May Day)

英语老师经常教导学生，写作一定要结合生活，人、物、事三结合才能写出优秀的作文，比如“五一劳动节”，国际节日。马上要过五一了，不光是国内中小学孩子假期归来要写作劳动节作文，也许国外的孩子也要写的，因为是国际节日。那劳动节作文要如何写呢，怎么写才能评为优秀作文？要注意这几点：

第一、开头要明确，些事就是些事，写人就要些人，不管混淆。
第二、注意时态和时间逻辑性，这是英语作文的重点之一。
第三，要想写出优秀的英语节日作文，要注意单词和句子的错误不要出现。

下面来看看刘同学“五一劳动节”的作文片段

May first is a Sunday. And it is the Labor’s Day. My mother said to me :“Open your eyes!And look out of the window. What a fine day! Let’s go to park,” So my mother, my classmate and I went to the park.

We took some foods in my schoolbag. On the way to the park. I saw the blue sky with snow-white clouds. I saw pear trees and some apple trees and so on.

Below the trees, there are several kinds of flowers. It’s colorful, blue, red, yellow, pink, purple, orange and white. I saw some balloons and butterflies in the sky. I ate popcorn, cornflakes, banana and lollipop. they were wonderful.

In the afternoon, we went to the zoo. I visited the birds, mice, cats, dogs, budgies, hamsters, rabbits and so on.

May Day is my favorite day!

五一就要到了，同学们开始对五一劳动节英语作文重视起来。写作文，尤其是写英语作文，必须要兴中有“数”。